Just a ordinary mage who likes to draw|animate stuff.
My honror to meet you traveller!
Alex
@Dynawizard98
Age 26, Male
Artistic Mage
A Castle that lives in my mind
Brazil
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jamriot
Really fun piece, thank you for participating! I think my favorite parts were your description of the boy's accident (how he would leave his dreams and unfinished stories behind is tragic and something really interesting to base a story off of) and your description of the fight with Kaizer, particularly the imagery of him exploding into coins. Just keep working on getting grammar issues out of your piece (some are understandable, but you had missing punctuation at the end of some sentences, etc) and you're in a more solid place! I'm excited to see what else you come up with in the future!